River Card (prod by: Gunstar Greene)

hey folks just thought i'd drop some of my own, would really like some opinions.

GunStar Greene's Page: http://gunstargreene.newgrounds.com/

the song: http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_songInfo.cfm?bandID=566397&songID=8937404

River Card:

come on place the wager and live it up
oh lost soul of the river card
as you strike gold, it's never enough
oh lost soul of the river card
just know you can't disregard
oh lost soul of the river card
dig your hole, place your bets
pick your toll, face your death

v1

Some start with everything, Some start with nothing
put that to disregard as the card decks shuffling
start the bets, and wish the best of hunting
russian roullette with the cousin of death it's coming
the neck strung in a noose, only trust in god's hand
begging for redemption when they've lost the chance
as the diamond sparkles the heart, in the grace of dirt
the bludgeoning of clubs can put the spades to work
takes the nerve of the poker face to see the win
funny the cards are the holders of fate this evening
as they embrace the deep end, they've found misery
placed alike the cards, face down in ****'s creek

b1

as money talks
he wants me to play
as money walks
he wants me to stay

come on place the wager and live it up
oh lost soul of the river card
as you strike gold, it's never enough
oh lost soul of the river card
just know you can't disregard
oh lost soul of the river card
dig your hole, place your bets
pick your toll, face your death

v2

seeing life like the deck of cards your dealt
it's hard to tell, how they could've bought there bail
locked in a cell, as the sleeveless trickster
only deceived himself as he tried to acheive his picture
of leisure and riches, all fun and no games
pulling the trigger as they hold the gun to your name
debt and toll one in the same, a deadly excursion
the longer the wait, the heavier the burden
as you steady the currents, within this tight of pressure
your only getting by with slivers when your living by the river
best to recognise the better, and accept the modest
as theres no tricks for death, with sense alike your pockets

b2

as money talks
she wants me to play
as money walks
she wants me to stay

come on place the wager and live it up
oh lost soul of the river card
as you strike gold, it's never enough
oh lost soul of the river card
just know you can't disregard
oh lost soul of the river card
dig your hole, place your bets
pick your toll, face your death