Tremelo Wave (prod. by: Raw Stiles)

hey folks, just hoping to get some feedback on this experiment. I haven't had the chance to get anyones ears on it. thanks!

you can find it here:
http://rnwhiphop.bandcamp.com/track/tremelo-waves

or here:
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page...songID=9171455

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beat by: Yunveroz
http://yunveroz.newgrounds.com/

lyrics, vocals by: R&W
www.rnwhiphop.bandcamp.com

lyrics:

when i flow
I've her embrace
oh tremelo wave

When i go
I've her escape
oh tremelo wave

Feel the cool wind breeze
all through my stone
my pool of intrigue
it's every hue of tone
your discard, i'll never know
So hard to let you go
oh my savored kiss
my held oasis
Feel your warm embrace
amongst the cold
as the snow's soaring blaze
you warm my soul
your nothing i'll never know
so reluctant to let you go
oh my constant loving
my arctic hotspring

when i flow
i've her place
oh tremelo wave

when i go
I've her grace
oh tremelo wave

See dawn on horizon
fresh touch of breath
find the dusk arriving
put our love to rest
some fall asleep to create new dreams
some weep upon the great blue stream
while some digress
to forget
just want you to simply know
you nummed my heart
what now is an empty hole
i will from embark
cast aside my lust for still waters
mast up high, a love will wonder
tides amongst the skies
amongst the stars

oh tremelo wave......