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Supreme Vs Gambit (2-1 Supreme Uppin Votes)

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Post by Supreme Wed Apr 14, 2010 3:44 pm

10 Lines.
House Rules.
Due ASAP.

I'll drop tonight.

Vote Link - http://www.crypticscriptures.com/cs-text-battles-f6/gambit-vs-bundy-1-1-uppin-votes-t54.htm#262

Good Luck fam.


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Post by Gambit Mugraw Wed Apr 14, 2010 3:51 pm

So i guess this devil worshipping freak can die in hell
you may be supreme but you'll never have the clientele
im rhyming well over your limit, this olympic hammer toss
Me Battle Supreme.? ..i was looking around for Diana Ross
This is a team.? i wouldnt pic you if i was the camera man
Your not the Man coz ur name is a 'Super Me' anagram
Your Puerto Rican.? without the talent of Pun or Ortiz
Punch me...you the type that would like to hug tree's
I bust free's, with more drops than a pidgeon coup
Think your Ill, i get rid of the sick like chicken soup

In the library so just a quick thing. I still havent voted.

Lets rock it out.
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Post by Supreme Thu Apr 15, 2010 3:47 am

Pull up your skirt i see your Vagina Fam, god damn, Go Finda Tan,
Cuz with that pale plateface, you must be the first welsh Chinaman/
I Attack Blocks, you Snatch Cots, a faggot known to Scratch Cocks,
How do you expect to win or even match me if you cant even Match Socks?/
I know its obvious but Gambit so its clear your Stealin dudes Rhymes,
You get no reception in your home town cuz BT aint Feelin your Lines/
You Naive Runt, Wales is a waste of space, please Believe Cunt,
Cuz men nailin there balls to tables is Wales greatest Achievement?/
Your a nob of giagantic perporsion, clearly the worlds biggest Prick,
That ladies and gentlemen is futher proof that Wales got the biggest Dick/

Sorry, i took so long, im tired so quick key, good luck fam.
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Post by Fan Tazzie Thu Apr 15, 2010 3:05 pm

Punchlines: Gambit just edging it
Wordplay: Tie
Personals: Supreme (Gambit had one too many name plays instead of others)
Multis: Gambit
Humour: Gambit (Diana Ross line haha)

Summary: Again, i can see the rust but i liked this Gambit verse better, seemed to have purpose and technique, this is the shit i can fuck with.
Supreme you had DOPE idea's but none of them ever amounted to anything, i think rust here too. Good battle but.

Overall Vote: Gambit

G'dluck with next battles people
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Post by Bundy Thu Apr 15, 2010 3:35 pm

GAMBIT:

So i guess this devil worshipping freak can die in hell
you may be
supreme but you'll never have the clientele

ok

im rhyming well over your
limit, this olympic hammer toss
Me Battle Supreme.? ..i was looking
around for Diana Ross

was cool, set up was pointless

This is a team.? i wouldnt pic you if i was the
camera man
Your not the Man coz ur name is a 'Super Me' anagram

meh

Your
Puerto Rican.? without the talent of Pun or Ortiz
Punch me...you the
type that would like to hug tree's

ok again

I bust free's, with more drops
than a pidgeon coup
Think your Ill, i get rid of the sick like
chicken soup

played

SUPREME:

Pull up your skirt i see your Vagina Fam, god damn, Go Finda Tan,
Cuz
with that pale plateface, you must be the first welsh Chinaman/

was ok

I
Attack Blocks, you Snatch Cots, a faggot known to Scratch Cocks,
How
do you expect to win or even match me if you cant even Match Socks?/

lol good personal

I
know its obvious but Gambit so its clear your Stealin dudes Rhymes,
You
get no reception in your home town cuz BT aint Feelin your Lines/

bit played

You
Naive Runt, Wales is a waste of space, please Believe Cunt,
Cuz men
nailin there balls to tables is Wales greatest Achievement?/

haha good dirty sanchez line

Your a
nob of giagantic perporsion, clearly the worlds biggest Prick,
That
ladies and gentlemen is futher proof that Wales got the biggest Dick/

didnt hit


OVERVIEW:
Rusty, played etc..
Liked Supreme's more had good punches, personals and wordplay..
Gambit, had humour again and was better than your last verse, but still a lot is needed.
My vote goes to Supreme for the 4 lines that hit, the others apart from maybe one personal/punch from Gambit, weren't great.

Vote - Supreme
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Post by Supreme Tue Apr 20, 2010 1:48 pm

Uppin Votes.
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Post by tdotr Fri Apr 23, 2010 10:28 am

Punchlines: gambit
Wordplay: tie
Personals: supreme
Multis: tie
Humour: supreme

think both were cool but supremes verse made me laugh more

You Naive Runt, Wales is a waste of space, please Believe Cunt,
Cuz men nailin there balls to tables is Wales greatest Achievement?/
best

vote=supreme

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