Evil Spirit Image
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Evil Spirit Image
by Bundy Fri Apr 23, 2010 5:07 pm
Topical piece, let me know what you's thinking..
Such a deciept of hope, my lifes like the shortest piece of rope
Each of my feelings hold a tear for the fear of most
People think i'm an evil ghost destined to reaping souls
Forever roaming the sea of skulls they see me betroved
Keeping my piers even nearer than my uneven control
Bodies vanishing, leave the scene while people decompose
Premonitions and visions of siblings retreating from homes
Residing on islands but i'll find them and compete with their pro's
Now they wanna see me dethroned, no chance of eating their foals
Contained to the beaches, see shit that nobody seems to behold
Don't like me? each to their own, i can see why you don't
Leaving my post, to teach a resolve to heathens and popes
I seem to be sunburnt from the amount of heat that i hold
Cloaked in a mystical veil, reading in brail, my head deep in a shoal
Peace isn't known, no pain relief my brains a beast from the dome
I'm not finished killing, i'm just restricting the itch while you see me evolve
Such a deciept of hope, my lifes like the shortest piece of rope
Each of my feelings hold a tear for the fear of most
People think i'm an evil ghost destined to reaping souls
Forever roaming the sea of skulls they see me betroved
Keeping my piers even nearer than my uneven control
Bodies vanishing, leave the scene while people decompose
Premonitions and visions of siblings retreating from homes
Residing on islands but i'll find them and compete with their pro's
Now they wanna see me dethroned, no chance of eating their foals
Contained to the beaches, see shit that nobody seems to behold
Don't like me? each to their own, i can see why you don't
Leaving my post, to teach a resolve to heathens and popes
I seem to be sunburnt from the amount of heat that i hold
Cloaked in a mystical veil, reading in brail, my head deep in a shoal
Peace isn't known, no pain relief my brains a beast from the dome
I'm not finished killing, i'm just restricting the itch while you see me evolve
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Re: Evil Spirit Image
by Supreme Sat Apr 24, 2010 2:06 pm
Yeah shits kool my dude, vocab is nice, flow is kool too.
Overall good shit.
Overall good shit.
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Re: Evil Spirit Image
by Gambit Mugraw Sat Apr 24, 2010 3:38 pm
Yeah flow of words is dope. The verse goes with the name Crypticscriptures.
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