Supreme Vs El-Nigro (2-0 Supreme Uppin Votes)

10 Lines.
House Rules.
Due ASAP.

Punchlines:
Wordplay:
Personals:
Multis:
Humour:

Good luck fam, i'll drop tonight or tomoro.

Peace.

ight cool 12pm deadline kid .. heres ma drop ..


What am I achieving.. from giving a beating to this thieving porto-rican*..

he dont even like rap.. he idolises kings of leon and rocks a mowhecan..

so im glad this is texts, coz ur speech patterns are to complex im be-leaving,

if we did this in person.. it'll be hard to understand.. what he says When Hes Speaking !

a gemini* weakling.. so its only right I maul you more..

supreme has tha twin personality of matt damon and born invincible*..

your pitiful.. so watch me kill off souljahz like im in sudan..

and I wouldn't rate you a 5*.. on tha 8th diagram.. check ..



when this kid smokes.. hes merry.. but touchy after a few bevy's

stays close to bundy and English men.. coz he loves European semi's *






* 1 speaks for its self ..

*2 hes a gemini

*3 his side pic is tha guy from born invincible (i hope) top movie too haha ..

*4.. only 5 parts of tha 8th diagram are showin on his side pic ..

*5.. speaks for it self lol ..

uppin on you peace

Fuck it, quick key, i gotta go out. Good luck.

Its Plain your Lame, go suck pussy you little Dyke Bitch,
Its like you lost both arms Pryor to this cah your never Strike Rich/
Your an embarrisment, your not one of us you Dwell for Crack,
El-Nigro? Fuck that, you aint Latino and sure as Hell aint Black/
i kill wannabe's, hense the reason im a prison Lifer,
So you wont see the future, like 8 Mile without Phifer/
Face to face you wont last, im freezin and you wont Survive the Cold,
How can this prick spit when he types and spells like a Five year Old?
This pussys afraid of heaters, he even wears Gloves to get Stoned,
Wanna know why this fag is loves bone thugs? Cuz he Loves to get Boned/

NIGRO:

What am I achieving.. from giving a beating to this thieving
porto-rican*..
he dont even like rap.. he idolises kings of leon
and rocks a mowhecan..

generic

so im glad this is texts, coz ur speech
patterns are to complex im be-leaving,
if we did this in person..
it'll be hard to understand.. what he says When Hes Speaking !

nah

a
gemini* weakling.. so its only right I maul you more..
supreme
has tha twin personality of matt damon and born invincible*..

meh

your
pitiful.. so watch me kill off souljahz like im in sudan..
and I
wouldn't rate you a 5*.. on tha 8th diagram.. check ..

best so far

when
this kid smokes.. hes merry.. but touchy after a few bevy's
stays
close to bundy and English men.. coz he loves European semi's *

dissing supreme and bundy in battles when we aren't even spittin together is a little played now

SUPREME:

Its Plain your Lame, go suck pussy you little Dyke Bitch,
Its like
you lost both arms Pryor to this cah your never Strike Rich/

Was nice

Your an
embarrisment, your not one of us you Dwell for Crack,
El-Nigro? Fuck
that, you aint Latino and sure as Hell aint Black/

nah

i kill wannabe's,
hense the reason im a prison Lifer,
So you wont see the future, like
8 Mile without Phifer/

played but ok

Face to face you wont last, im freezin and
you wont Survive the Cold,
How can this prick spit when he types and
spells like a Five year Old?

ok personal

This pussys afraid of heaters, he even
wears Gloves to get Stoned,
Wanna know why this fag is loves bone
thugs? Cuz he Loves to get Boned/

ok


Overview:

Neither really brought a lot to the table, personals were weak, punches were generics a lot, and seemed like you both rushed it which seems to take away from the strength of each verse.
Punches i'd give to Supreme, Personals would be a tie, wordplay the same.

So by that means, i gotta give it to Supreme.

Vote - Soup Ream

Right it goes like this: 3 bars each.

NIGRO.

What am I achieving.. from giving a beating to this thieving porto-rican*..
he dont even like rap.. he idolises kings of leon and rocks a mowhecan..

*Weak start for me

so im glad this is texts, coz ur speech patterns are to complex im be-leaving,
if we did this in person.. it'll be hard to understand.. what he says When Hes Speaking !

*Dunno what the 'Be-Leaving' is for.? Weak bar

when this kid smokes.. hes merry.. but touchy after a few bevy's
stays close to bundy and English men.. coz he loves European semi's

*Didnt really speak for itself.


SUPREME

Its Plain your Lame, go suck pussy you little Dyke Bitch,
Its like you lost both arms Pryor to this cah your never Strike Rich/

*Yeah had a punch i suppose. Better start.

Your an embarrisment, your not one of us you Dwell for Crack,
El-Nigro? Fuck that, you aint Latino and sure as Hell aint Black

*haha yeah your only good punch but wasent all that. made be smile

Face to face you wont last, im freezin and you wont Survive the Cold,
How can this prick spit when he types and spells like a Five year Old?

*Truth. but still not amazing.


For me it was a horrid battle to read since you both took 2 days to write it and i no you both could do better. El i hated the layout i dont no what all the gaps wer for but it made it horrid to read. Supreme was more constructive and thought about multi's alot more. Alot of it was amatuer shit from both but supreme was much funnier and had more substance.

VOTE- Supreme Team

Wasent feeling it. Sorry.

yeah cool it dont matter i havent wrote in so long an dont net battle so its all practise