Boredom Keystyle lol

5 in da morn im awake so here it gos...

fuck hoes ima panty raider....
mack on chicks then play-her like a saga...
a mental mix between darth-vader and vaga..
these rappers so wet.. ma heat evpourates them to vapours..
tha krayzie caper.. to these dark knight bat types..
to add my night vision sights.. allign and enguage when ever i like..
you tha type.. to eat stinking pussy that mimics tripes...
and eat frosted flakes everyday but havent earned your stripes..
so befor i insipire i strike with tha vennom of a viper..
only way your beating me is if hell sees snow.. or i inherrit tha genetic code of a liger..


10 lines of boredom lolololol soz jus tryin to get ma mind flowing at this krayzie hour .. peace

darth-vadar and play-her isn't a multi so why the '-' is there i do not know..
The ... after everyline is quite annoying too

Other than that it's a cool piece, not too indepth but still has a good feel which is what i like about keys, keep posting piece's up, i'll keep critting.

hahaha dont ask dude it was 5 in tha morn i know it wasent up to par havent wrote in so long but im back onit now haha ill drop ina biz see what we got init peaceee

Equally bored at work...

Oh so you're a playa playa right? But for which team?
I seen your secret diary detailing your favourite wet dream
Of being any one of the big time football managers
chasing the squad with a towel shoutin' - Let's Hit The Showers !
And on the pitch you don't cut them no rope
so for a good performance they always hope
cos if under pressure they don't manage to cope
later you'll be behind them droppin the soap !!!!

Dropping the soap? that's one definition of clogging a hole
My idea's are hot headed, i got a lightbulb at the top of my skull
I'll go back to the past, with your raps.. nothing is 'Drole'
The same bitch to date a bitch, it's like your fucking a troll
Better pass the sess before i get vexed
Bundy, the text vet, fuck it.. i'm going to sleep on my death bed
When i wake i'll release my plague of poisonous thunder clouds
And wrap napalm around my feet so i blow up undergroun

Rhythm Of the moonlight
blood in the air tonight
ninja shadows swift to take flight
headed for your campsite
armed with sharp tongues and amped mics
blade dipped in venom feel the snake bite
the poison spreads through your torso
dead your flesh leave you hollow
only thing left standing - the village scarecrow
whose dead eyes tell no tales
a mystery for imaginations to unveil
cos silence prevails
leaving myths of monsters that come in the night
told to young kids to fill them with fright
leave em begging to leave on a light.

watch how i put it down.....

forget tha krayzie banter.. ill stelth cammo shank ya..
when i hop out of tha dark dressed ina all black panther..
deadly styles ive masterd.. through tha shit ive obtained..
donating 24 happy hours to tha modern day slaves..
let go.. subside when we kick back..
be real.. you couldnt break a bitch in with a kit kat..
a dude so smooth could say hes chin chilla coated..
diverse tha twist in ma words can leave a gobby bitch choking..
ma device is cloaking.. like that D'n'B track....
your lines follow tha track to your vein's for smack..

a lil quick thing better than tha top 1 hahaha im slowly starting to trigger back into things a bit uppin on feed back peace ..

wake up put on my shirt shackle and chain
keep an eye on my master cos i can't miss the train
don't get me wrong its not prison that i fear
but the government that rules and the corporate overseer
got a family to support through every step that i take
up to my eyes in debt tell me can you relate
to that slow sinking feeling
under the world's pressure bending
to our futile search to fill our lives with meaning
bury our sorrow in useless commodities we keep consuming