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Gambit vs Bundy (3-2 Bundy Wins)

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Post by Bundy Tue Apr 13, 2010 6:24 pm

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GAMBIT'S VERSE::

This is like opening hours at the pub, my bars are ready
Really hes a cuddly bear that named himself after Teddy
I mean Ted, Bundy you need strength because your shits weak
Your supreme's dick tease, let him lick whipped cream
off your flab, trying to get the monkey off your back
He got Court trying to play ball and got the sack
Says he 'On Road'..but its ment to be closed off
Edward your more annoying than Sensa from dontflop
your not Phat, your physical says your hungry
Its a fact i wont loose against Jedward Bundy

Your underage gays just looking for the New Camp
Funny i got a bigger buzz in engalnd than you have
your true whack, 2sg battles are your only Highlight
Liar.! You dont like Phi-Life....you like Twilight


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Post by Bundy Tue Apr 13, 2010 6:39 pm

Ok.. this man's shit, any objections? "ahhh!.. shit"
This guys already a biter.. that's why Gam-Bit
ALRIGHTY, guys like gambit, end up whack rappers hating the game
this dudes a mug.. JUST LIKE IT SAYS IN HIS NAME!
It's amazing that pain, is something that you've become acustomed to
Dudes a bottom feeder.. that's why you got other men ASS FUCKING YOU!
This is a key, better believe.. that it's an action of fate
Stop hiding it.. your avatar IS YOUR ACTUAL FACE!
T WUN 3, T13, that either means your a group of faggots
Or you've only won 3 battles.. man, you fools embarrased?
This bitch a faggot, im gonna win.. bitch you happy?
Obvious gay shit.. this guy even lives 'IN' Barry

You're an Ex-MAN your a bitch now, gambit? no luck
Funny your names gambit, but you never blow up


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Post by Bundy Tue Apr 13, 2010 6:40 pm

Votes plz
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Post by Gambit Mugraw Tue Apr 13, 2010 6:55 pm

I vote Gambit - hes ill.


Sorry to supreme for saying you licked cream off edds flab, we no its the other way around lol.

Come on people lets get this first battle voted up.
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Post by Olly Flexx Tue Apr 13, 2010 8:58 pm

Punchlines: edd
Wordplay: gambit
Personals: gambit
Multis: draw
Humour: gambit
Summary: both was good dont get me wrong main bars that stood out for me on edds was


Ok.. this man's shit, any objections? "ahhh!.. shit"
This guys already a biter.. that's why Gam-Bit
ALRIGHTY, guys like gambit, end up whack rappers hating the game
this dudes a mug.. JUST LIKE IT SAYS IN HIS NAME!

............................

as for gambit most of it stood out to me mainly the humour yet again main bars i liked was

..........................

off your flab, trying to get the monkey off your back
He got Court trying to play ball and got the sack

and.....

your not Phat, your physical says your hungry
Its a fact i wont loose against Jedward Bundy

and.....

your true whack, 2sg battles are your only Highlight
Liar.! You dont like Phi-Life....you like Twilight


Overall Vote: GAMBIT

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Post by Bundy Wed Apr 14, 2010 10:38 am

aight.. uppin more votes
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Post by Gambit Mugraw Wed Apr 14, 2010 3:32 pm

first to 3.?
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Post by Supreme Wed Apr 14, 2010 3:41 pm

Gambit

This is like opening hours at the pub, my bars are ready
Really hes a cuddly bear that named himself after Teddy

Set up was kool, punch was kinda weak.

I mean Ted, Bundy you need strength because your shits weak
Your supreme's dick tease, let him lick whipped cream

LOL, no hate cuz its me, but its a playground diss, not hard.

off your flab, trying to get the monkey off your back
He got Court trying to play ball and got the sack

Best bar so far, not the hardest but the wordplay was kool.

Says he 'On Road'..but its ment to be closed off
Edward your more annoying than Sensa from dontflop

LOL.

your not Phat, your physical says your hungry
Its a fact i wont loose against Jedward Bundy

LOL at the mental image of Edd with Jedward hair, had humour but thats about it.

Your underage gays just looking for the New Camp
Funny i got a bigger buzz in engalnd than you have

Ok.

your true whack, 2sg battles are your only Highlight
Liar.! You dont like Phi-Life....you like Twilight

Ok.

Bundy

Ok.. this man's shit, any objections? "ahhh!.. shit"
This guys already a biter.. that's why Gam-Bit

Kool nameplay, its obviously as hell but its ok.

ALRIGHTY, guys like gambit, end up whack rappers hating the game
this dudes a mug.. JUST LIKE IT SAYS IN HIS NAME!

Same as above.

It's amazing that pain, is something that you've become acustomed to
Dudes a bottom feeder.. that's why you got other men ASS FUCKING YOU!

Nice, kool wordplay.

This is a key, better believe.. that it's an action of fate
Stop hiding it.. your avatar IS YOUR ACTUAL FACE!

LOL, ok diss.

T WUN 3, T13, that either means your a group of faggots
Or you've only won 3 battles.. man, you fools embarrased?

Kool wordplay and personal.

This bitch a faggot, im gonna win.. bitch you happy?
Obvious gay shit.. this guy even lives 'IN' Barry

LOL yeah thats a kool line, i remember using someting like that against El Negro time ago.

You're an Ex-MAN your a bitch now, gambit? no luck
Funny your names gambit, but you never blow up

Ok.

Overall i can tell your both rusty. Overall imma give it to Edd for a more technical verse, he had better punchlines, wordplay and personals, Gambit had a kool verse, but there was too many playground style disses and not enough technical punchlines for my liking.

Vote - Bundy.

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Post by Gambit Mugraw Wed Apr 14, 2010 3:54 pm

Respect. yeah man they are a bit corny these battles. Edd we will have to do a proper one and take time on the verse's.

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This is a key, better believe.. that it's an action of fate
Stop hiding it.. your avatar IS YOUR ACTUAL FACE!


funny shits tho.
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Post by EL-Nigro Thu Apr 15, 2010 4:08 am

ight i know me and gambit are crew but i have neva voted so if mine dont count then cool ima do this fairly ! : ma take :

Gambit:

This is like opening hours at the pub, my bars are ready
Really hes a cudly bear that named himself after Teddy
:okay starter: - tie

I mean Ted, Bundy you need strength because your shits weak
Your supreme's dick tease, let him lick whipped cream
:i liked it lol: + 1

off your flab, trying to get the monkey off your back
He got Court trying to play ball and got the sack
:thats not so bad: +1

Says he 'On Road'..but its ment to be closed off
Edward your more annoying than Sensa from dontflop
:i liked this punch:

your not Phat, your physical says your hungry
Its a fact i wont loose against Jedward Bundy
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Your underage gays just looking for the New Camp
Funny i got a bigger buzz in engalnd than you have
:nice: +1

your true whack, 2sg battles are your only Highlight
Liar.! You dont like Phi-Life....you like Twilight
nice finish: +1

Edd Bundy:

Ok.. this man's shit, any objections? "ahhh!.. shit"
This guys already a biter.. that's why Gam-Bit
:its a okay starter: tie

ALRIGHTY, guys like gambit, end up whack rappers hating the game
this dudes a mug.. JUST LIKE IT SAYS IN HIS NAME!
:thats better plus a better percy: +1

It's amazing that pain, is something that you've become acustomed to
Dudes a bottom feeder.. that's why you got other men ASS FUCKING YOU!
:this was okay could of been better fort out tho:

This is a key, better believe.. that it's an action of fate
Stop hiding it.. your avatar IS YOUR ACTUAL FACE!
:good punch: +1

T WUN 3, T13, that either means your a group of faggots
Or you've only won 3 battles.. man, you fools embarrased?
:this was okay aswell edd:

This bitch a faggot, im gonna win.. bitch you happy?
Obvious gay shit.. this guy even lives 'IN' Barry
:yer nice this was lol: +1

You're an Ex-MAN your a bitch now, gambit? no luck
Funny your names gambit, but you never blow up

:could of come much harder man wers tha fireeee:

Breakdown

i have it at gambit 5 to 3 i thought it was a cool battle .. i kinda fort edd was on about gay jokes a bit to much sum hitt but some neva .. i fort gambit came better with some of his stuff as more thought out but over all was nice.. i will ask for tha promo o.t hahah .. but i have it at gambit 5 to 3 no siding or wa eva u call it lol took me bloody ages to complie this report Peace

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Post by Fan Tazzie Thu Apr 15, 2010 3:01 pm

Punchlines: Bundy
Wordplay: Bundy
Personals: Tie
Multis: Bundy
Humour: Gambit
Summary: Verses were a bit played out and the personals lacked a quality. I think Bundy had the better of them tho, Punchlines/Wordplay was obviously taken by Bundy.
Gambit your verse was funny, but half of the lines i would expect from somebody new to battling not someone who has battled a lot.
I understand the rustyness tho, i had that haha.

Best Bars:

Gambit:
I mean Ted, Bundy you need strength because your shits weak
Your supreme's dick tease, let him lick whipped cream

Bundy:
It's amazing that pain, is something that you've become acustomed to
Dudes a bottom feeder.. that's why you got other men ASS FUCKING YOU!

This bitch a faggot, im gonna win.. bitch you happy?
Obvious gay shit.. this guy even lives 'IN' Barry

For the reasons above i vote - Bundy

Oh and i know i'm not the best battler ever and i'm some random myspace rapper, but i've battled before and know that battles are based on TECHNICAL ability, not just humour, so people should look for that instead of just saying that someone made you laugh.
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Post by Gambit Mugraw Thu Apr 15, 2010 5:55 pm

Each to there own it depends how you like your battles. Id rather hear Humour than grimey punches, respect for the votes. Upping on the 1 more.
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Post by Supreme Tue Apr 20, 2010 1:47 pm

Uppin Votes.
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Post by tdotr Fri Apr 23, 2010 10:31 am

Punchlines: bundy
Wordplay: bundy
Personals: bundy
Multis: bundy
Humour: gambit

alot of gambits verse was played an ive seen b4 and i thought bundy had the better punchlines and wordplay

vote=bundy

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Post by Supreme Fri Apr 23, 2010 12:36 pm

3-2 Bundy.

Continue to 5 or stop here?
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Post by Gambit Mugraw Fri Apr 23, 2010 5:26 pm

i dont mind, there isnt anyone else to vote i dont think.
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Post by Die-Rekta Fri Apr 23, 2010 7:29 pm

I'de give tha battle to gambino man he made me laugh tha most so its all on that i guess....nice punches from jedward bundy tho lolllll

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Post by Bundy Fri Apr 23, 2010 9:59 pm

So whats happening?
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Post by Bundy Sat Apr 24, 2010 2:11 pm

Is it being locked or we waiting for more votes? i really don't mind either way.
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Post by Gambit Mugraw Sat Apr 24, 2010 3:05 pm

lock it man you took it i suppose. go again soon and i will write a real verse lol good shit though lets get more battles going people.
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